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Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Prelude to Love-- A Midnight Seductions Fall Flasher

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The reflection of the fireworks rained inside the lake. Ally sat atop the knoll overlooking the magical display, remembering the last time she and Mike had made love. She trailed her hand across the cool grass and smiled. The next day a heart attack had taken him. He was only thirty-eight.

Taking the last sip of wine, she stowed the glass in her picnic basket and stood. She’d toasted Mike one last time, laying down her mantle of tears, ready to begin life anew.

The fireworks finale had begun and she looked up at the last remnants of color falling through the sky. Music captured her attention and anxious to join the gathering, she swung the basket at her side and made her way down the hill toward the throng of people gathered along the lake’s shore.

The music grew louder as she neared and people flocked to the pavilion. Couples danced to the sensual beat of a love ballad. The image of being held in a man's arms sent a heated shiver up her spine. Five years was a long time to go without a man's touch.

Maybe she wasn't ready for all the frivolity. Turning toward the lake, she skirted the crowd, and walked to the end of the pier. She sat down on the edge and dangled her feet in the water. The ripples created as she swished her toes through the blackness, incited the moon's reflection to bounce excitedly.

She lifted her long, red hair away from her neck. Temperatures had soared and the air lay heavy and wet. Checking to make sure no one watched, she pulled her cotton shift over her head and removed her bra and panties.

Her body dropped into the water, letting the icy liquid engulf her. She eased onto her back and floated. The lingering scent of gunpowder slowly dissipated, its cloud moving with the gentle breeze stirring above.

A quiet snap startled her. She righted herself, treading water, and looked back at the shore, clearly making out the silhouette of a man. Can he see me? She remained as motionless as possible and prayed he'd walk away.

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Jackson stood at the water's edge and watched her float in the moon's reflection. He first caught sight of her making her way to the hilltop and followed, watching her from the shadows of the wooded area. Each time a rocket burst into the air, its light cascaded over her like a waterfall. His cock swelled, just as it did that night she'd given him his very first kiss.

Ally Kenyon. He hadn’t laid eyes on her in twenty-four years, but he'd never forgotten her. The object of all his wet dreams during high school and she still made him hard. Jackson stripped out of his clothes and waded into the water. She was the one that had gotten away, and by damn, she wouldn’t get away again.

23 comments:

LA Day said...

Great Fall Flasher! It really makes you want to read more.

Tess MacKall said...

Thanks, LA

Flashers are fun to write. I kind of like this character Jackson. My kind of man. lol

Adrianne Brennan said...

Intrigued. This could be the beginning of a great story (hint, hint!)

Tess said...

Hint hint taken! I have more of this written. But I'm working on some pure erotica right now. Not in the mood for too much romance these days, just the sex, please. lol

Thanks, Adrianne

Jambrea said...

Um...when you say flash you mean it! lol

Is there going to be more to this? I really like it!

Cassandra Gold said...

What a cool story! Lots of emotion packed into so few words. Great job!

:)

orelukjp0 said...

What a great short. I would love to read more about Jackson and Ally. It sounds like it would make a hot little story.

AJ Llewellyn said...

Tess, that was the perfect short story. Wow. You packed an emotional wallop in a very short space of time. No need to elaborate. It's beautiful, tragic and full of hope too.
Hugs,
AJ

lindseye said...

It does sound like the opening of a short story. I would pick it up to read the rest. Already so much is revealed in such a brief interlude.

Mary Ann Reed - Mary Suzanne said...

Everyone said it all in the above comments on your story. I loved the flasher and the way it headed for a hea ending. My kind of story.

Deb said...

Tess, oh I like this. Great fall flasher girl.

Endless Romance Contest said...

Hi Jambrea,

This is just something I jotted down a while ago. One of those stories that pops into your head but you never get around to finishing it. It would be a very traditional type romance with the hot hot sex thrown in of course. lol So after the response I have received here today, I just might finish this one.

Tess MacKall said...

Ooops! I was signed in as the Endless Romance Contest when I commented to Jambrea. So sorry. Let me try again as Tess. lol

Cassandra--You had a wonderful idea when you suggested doing these fall flashers. I love them. As a matter of fact I'm thinking about doing one for a Halloween Contest. Your flasher is fantastic!

Flashers are a good writing exercise for authors I think. It's a challenge to get your writing as tight as possible. No wasted words.

Tess MacKall said...

Orelukjpo...thanks so much. I like this couple too. I can see this one getting hot, but at the same time, with what I know about these two...lol...I can also see a lot of tension.

Tess MacKall said...

Awww... A J, you leave me the sweetest comments. Yep, tried to pack some emotion in there. So glad you think I hit the target.

Tess MacKall said...

Lindseye...thank you so much. I'm thrilled to know I was able to capture attention. 500 words is not a lot of writing rooom. lol So I am very pleased with the way this turned out and the comments on it. Thanks again.

Tess MacKall said...

Mary Anne,

Aww, thanks girl. I was very pleased with this flasher. I think I said above I want to write one for Halloween, but I've never written anything scary. lol

Doubt I can figure out anything scary for Jackson and Ally to do either. lol Maybe bite each other? lol

Tess MacKall said...

Thanks, Deb!

This is the first time I have ever tried a flasher. Short stories yea, but not one this short. lol I'm happy with it. How's Bob?

Angela Guillaume said...

Tess, I'm finally back! Malta, Venice, Conference...phew! It's been a rollercoaster ride. Well, this is a lovely little story. I love the imagery and you really get in the characters' heads in such a short span of words. You did a wonderful job, and it shows what a great writer you are.

Dee Dawning said...

Nice Story Tess. You cut it just a little too short though.

Dee

Tess MacKall said...

Angela!!! Venice!! Good Lord, surely you are writing something from that setting. Venice is on my list of places to see before I die. And my high school senior swears she is going with me. lol

Thank you so much for the kind words. I am thinking seriously about fleshing this one into a full blown novella first of the year.

Tess MacKall said...

Dee,

I could have gone on with Jackson and then of course going at it in the water. Sex in the water is great!

But mean ole Cassandra would only allow us 500 words. lol

Big Hug to ya, hot stuff!

Barb said...

You are kidding, right Tess! You cant't end it there. I need to know what happens.